In He Puna Kawnga we have been learning to write descriptions. To write description you have to be good at noticing, observing and wondering. We went around the school doing this then wrote poems inspired by Frank Kendon´s the looker on. Here is my poem.
Hi Kayesschen
ReplyDeleteI like your poem because its so colorful and you did a good job of describing the front our our class.
Hi Kayesschen
ReplyDeleteI like your looker-on poem because it is colorful. I liked what you wrote when you said that the clouds looked like candy floss.
Hi Kayesschen
ReplyDeleteI like your looker-on poem because of it's colorful background. You gave me a picture in my head when I read it.
Hey Kayesschen
ReplyDeleteThat writing of your looker on poem gives me a big picture in my head. I wish that I had those ideas!!!
Hi Kayesschen
ReplyDeleteI like the writing in your looker on poem. It gives me a big picture in my head. I wish that I had those ideas in my looker poem.
Hi Kayesschen
ReplyDeleteI like the looker on poem you made because it gave me a picture in my head. I wish I had those ideas too!
Hi Kayesschen
ReplyDeleteI like your poem because it gives me a picture in my head when I read it and it is colouful.
Hi Kayesschen,
ReplyDeleteI LOVE your poem because of all the bright colours and all of the different groovy sentences. I also love your picture!!!:)
Hi Kayesschen
ReplyDeleteThe candy floss clouds sound very yummy. I like all the bright colours you used. I liked it and it really gave me a picture in my head.