He puna Tarei

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Thursday, June 6, 2019

Emotions poem

He Puna Kawenga wrote emotion poems when Ms Bennett was in our class. This is mine describing the emotion sad, I hope you like it!

6 comments:

  1. I like your emotions poster.They are really good impressions of sad sad. It makes me think if you are feeling sad. Because are you?

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  2. Hi Kayesschen
    I like your emotion poem.I think you did a good job describing your emotion.Why did you choose sad?

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  3. Hi Kayesschen
    I like your emotions poem because I think it is cool.
    I think you did a good job on your emotion poem.

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  4. Hi Kayesschen
    I like your emotion poem so much because it describes sadness. Did
    you find this hard.

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  5. Hi Kayesschen
    I realy enjoyed reading your emotion poem! Your last sentence realy hooked me. You did a good job describing sad.

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  6. Hi Kayesschen
    I like your emotion poem there are some really good impressions of sad. You also did a good description of sad.

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