He puna Tarei

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Tuesday, July 2, 2019

Six sentence story

In He Puna Kawenga we had to make a six sentence story. We had to make the story start with once upon a time. Here is my story!
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8 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 7, 2019 at 5:15 PM

    Hi Kayesschen
    I like your six sentence story because it's all scary and dark and I love the way you turned him in to a balloon.

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  2. AnonymousAugust 14, 2019 at 4:57 PM

    Hi Kayesschen
    I like your six sentence story because you did a good job describing your six sentence story. Why did you chose your character as a ogre?

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  3. AnonymousAugust 14, 2019 at 5:19 PM

    Hi Kayesschen.
    I love your Six Sentence Story, "How did you find an ugly ogre". There was lots of describing words. My favourite part was when he turned into a balloon.

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 1, 2019 at 5:25 PM

    Hi Kayesschen
    I like the bit on your six sentence story when the orge turned his house into ashes because his power was his problem. Where was the bloody fence on the bit about where he lives though?

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  5. AnonymousSeptember 4, 2019 at 4:22 PM

    Hey Kayesschen
    I like your six sentence story because it was a bit scary. I didn't get really scared. I liked the part when he made his house turned into ashes.

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  6. AnonymousSeptember 10, 2019 at 3:42 PM

    Hi Kayesschen
    I like your six sentence story because it is interesting and a little bit scary. My favorite part is that he turned his hole house into ashes.

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  7. AnonymousSeptember 18, 2019 at 4:43 PM

    Hi Kayesschen
    I like your six sentence story because it's all scary and dark. I love the way you turned him in to a balloon.

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  8. AnonymousNovember 20, 2019 at 2:48 PM

    Hi Kayesschen
    I like your six sentence story because its dark and magical.
    I like how your character is an ogre because I love them.

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